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How to Write a Short Speech Presenting a Nomination Award

A short speech nominating a colleague for an award is considered a special occasion speech. This is a milestone event in the award recipient's life, and it demands a moment of reflection on her life and accomplishments. Once the speech is written and memorized, it should be delivered with energy and professionalism. The honoree will remember this event for a long time.

Do the Research

When nominating a friend or colleague for an award, get the details correct. This is not the time to mispronounce his name, flub his title or misrepresent the professional accomplishments that pertain to the award he's receiving. If the speech is to nominate him for employee of the year, for example, find out what specific work achievements set him apart from the other nominees. Talk to the nominee's friends and colleagues to obtain personal information about the impact he has had on others. Because the speech should be short, use only the best and most relevant material you find.

List Achievements

The speech should include the specific reasons why you believe the nominee is worthy of the nomination. It has to be short, so only include the achievements and anecdotes that advance that purpose; extraneous information only weakens the strength of your other material. Explain the skills that make her eligible for the award and the qualities that distinguish her from other nominees.

Explain Significance of Award

Briefly explain the significance of the award itself, including who originated it, why it was started, how many years the award has been given out and the names of some past recipients. Include an illustrative anecdote about the importance of the award and how the award has affected the lives of past recipients. Tie this information into your speech about why the person you're nominating is the ideal recipient and a natural member of this elite group of award winners.

The speech should not be a dry recitation of facts. The opening lines especially should grab the audience's attention. Using jokes or quotes appropriate to the occasion draws the crowd in and keeps people listening for the more substantive parts of the speech. When nominating someone for an award, it's a gracious gesture to acknowledge the merits and accomplishments of the other nominees as well. But don't go overboard on this, as the goal of the speech is to motivate the selection of your subject for the award.

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How to Give an Award Presentation Speech (Example Included!)

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Congratulations! Chances are that if you're reading this article, you have been named an award recipient for an accomplishment or are involved with bestowing an award to others. Either way, in the work context, you should aim for a professional yet enjoyable speech.

People often focus on whatever the person getting the award is going to say about it. Less mentioned is the speech given beforehand by the award presenter. However, this is also a very important and prestigious job. 

After all, the presenter is tasked with setting the mood of the event, giving context to the honor being awarded and introducing them in an engaging way. Writing and delivering a killer presentation speech takes time, thought, and preparation. It's no small feat!

Feeling nervous about it? Here's how to write and deliver a speech presenting an award—or receiving one.

How to write an award presentation speech

When writing your speech, try to strike a balance between covering the necessary information—like the details of the award and the accomplishments of the person being honored—and keeping your audience interested. 

Break down the components of the speech in an outline at first to make sure you hit everything you want to say. 

1. Begin with a captivating opener

This is an opportunity to put some personal flair into your speech. Know your audience. Start with a joke or a funny anecdote, if it's appropriate. If not, you might start with a personal memory or connection to the person being awarded. The opening of a presentation award speech is your moment to set the tone and grab the audience's attention.

2. Give some background

Give some context to the award you're presenting. How much or how little is up to you, your organization and the setting, but it's important to ground the speech in why the event is happening. Did someone specific fund this award? When and for what reason? What does it represent? What kind of qualities does it recognize in the person who receives it? 

If you have a personal connection to the award or the person receiving it, you may mention it here. Are you a past winner of this same award? Is the person receiving it one of your employees or close friends? You can use this as an opportunity to transition into introducing the person and their work. 

4. Talk about the awardee's work

Next, introduce the work or qualifications of the person being awarded. Talk about the work that stood out to the organization or committee presenting this honor to them. How does their work relate or contribute to the wider cause? 

You could mention other awards they have won in the past or a memory or anecdote about the person being honored if you have a personal connection with them. You may also have a bio of theirs to read, if they specified how they wanted to be introduced. 

Either way, put a good portion of your time and thought into this part of your speech. Your job is to present this award to this specific person, so put intention and energy into representing them and their accomplishments well. Though they may have a long and prestigious resume , try to keep it relatively short. Hit the highlights and the most relevant information to the occasion.

5. Keep it on the short side

You have a good bit of information to cover in order to give a heartfelt, personalized speech, but try your best to keep it fairly brief. You don't want to overshadow the person getting the award by taking too much time away from their acceptance speech or lose your audience halfway through. 

Practice your speech, and time yourself when you do. This will ensure you're keeping things concise and including everything you wanted to say. Decide whether you're going to memorize your speech or if you're going to have notecards or a written copy. Practice however you're going to deliver it to make sure you've got it down.

Presenting an award: Speech template

Now let's put all these tips into practice. To start, here's a template of an award presentation speech that is pretty standard and can be used in many different types of recognizations.

[Good morning/evening/night] folks, 

It is with great pleasure that I join you here today to present the [title of award] on behalf of [your company]. This is the [number] year this award has been presented, and it remains one of the highest honors in this field, recognizing the person in our community whose work has had a truly outstanding [type of outcome or impact the award winner's work caused]. 

As a committee member, I can tell you that the nominees this year were some of the most [qualities of the nominees] people I've had the pleasure of knowing. However, one person stood out for their remarkable career in this field. 

They have made an inestimable contribution to our community over their [time the award winner works for the company] of work in our [your work field], working to [their goals, passion/goals or what they work for]. They have gone on to become an example in [what this person does in their field + achievements].

I have had the absolute honor of working closely with this person throughout their career, and I cannot be happier to see them honored here tonight. Without further ado, the [title of award] goes to [name of the winner]. Please join me in welcoming them to the stage. 

Presenting an award: Speech example

Want to see the template come to life? This example of an award presentation speech shows you how to fill in the blanks and serves as a guide for writing your own.

Good evening folks, 

It is with great pleasure that I join you here today to present the Outstanding Achievement Award for Social Service on behalf of The Zyx Company. This is the 25th year this award has been presented, and it remains one of the highest honors in this field, recognizing the person in our community whose work has had a truly outstanding impact in the lives of many. 

As a committee member, I can tell you that the nominees this year were some of the most incredible, hardworking and compassionate people I've had the pleasure of knowing. However, one person stood out for their remarkable career in this field. 

They have made an inestimable contribution to our community over their 20 years of work in our public school systems, working to improve the lives of our students and future leaders. They have gone on to become an example in social work and innovation in combating homelessness and worked tirelessly to obtain greater resources for people in marginalized communities.

I have had the absolute honor of working closely with this person throughout their career, and I cannot be happier to see them honored here tonight. Without further ado, the Outstanding Achievement Award for Social Service goes to Jill Smith. Please join me in welcoming them to the stage.

How do you give a speech after receiving an award?

What about if you're on the other side of the award presentation? Writing an award acceptance speech is also an art. Similarly, you want to plan ahead and make sure you hit certain points within your speech. 

Receiving an award is an incredible honor and can be exciting or overwhelming, so you want to do the preparation beforehand in order to say what you want to say. 

"Thank the Academy" and others 

You want to be sure to thank the people involved in giving you this award. This list includes the organization or committee presenting it to you and the presenter, as well as anyone who you feel helped to get you where you are today. We've all seen heartfelt, lengthy thank you lists delivered over Academy Awards and Emmys. 

This is a common factor in awards speeches for a reason. No one achieves their success without help from people who believe in them. Identify who you want to shout out during your speech, and if you need to, make a physical list so you don't leave anyone out. 

Share a bit about your work 

Share a bit of your work and why you're proud of it. Are there any lessons your road to this award has taught you? What aspect of what you do are you most excited to share with the world, and why do you think it's important?

Make a statement

If you feel compelled to do so, use the platform you have during your acceptance speech to make a statement about a larger social or political issue pertaining to your work. Is there a cause you're particularly passionate about? What do you want to say and promote through this moment?

Watch the time

There might be time constraints on your speech as well. Either way, try not to make it too lengthy. Have a plan, rehearse and be ready to say what you planned to say. 

Final thoughts

Whether you're presenting an award or receiving one, preparation is essential in order to deliver a thoughtful speech. Make sure you do your research, know what you want to say and practice ahead of time so that, when the day comes, you're ready to go. 

Awards ceremonies can be exciting and moving events, and often it's the speeches that make or break them. Take on this responsibility with excitement, and put time and thought into your presentation.

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Having learned of the call for nominations for this year's (Name of Award), I am writing today to endorse a highly suitable individual, (Name of Nominee). In many ways exceeding the challenging requirements and expectations for the award, (Name of Nominee)'s ambitions, intelligence, and accomplishments complement precisely the stellar community of past recipients and make her highly deserving of the honor and opportunity bestowed by the (Name of Award). To further support this nomination, I would be pleased to express in more detail my personal insights into (Name of Nominee)'s unique talents and qualifications, and I would welcome the opportunity to mention additional contacts who would be willing to express their support of the nominee. Please feel free to contact me at any time.

I am pleased to nominate Jane Doe for the Employee of the Year Award. I have known and worked with Jane for ten years and have always found her dependable, efficient, and unfailingly punctual. In fact, I have never worked with a person who gives as much attention to detail as she does. Also, her willingness to take on difficult projects like the Doe proposals and see them to successful completion has repeatedly impressed me over the years.

Her skills do not end with her office work. She also projects a warm, cheerful attitude to our clients. I have seen her resolve conflicts and handle other difficult situations with remarkable patience and admirable tact. In the community she goes out of her way to help people in need by organizing charity drives each December and singing with the city choir. She loves people, works hard, and always tries to lift the spirits of those around her. I believe these characteristics represent all that is good in our company, and I am pleased to nominate her for the honor of Employee of the Year.

I wish to nominate Jane Doe, a friend and colleague of more than ten years, for the Caretaker of the Year Award. Jane and I work together on many fund-raising events each year and she never ceases to impress me. She is easily the most compassionate person I know--the kind of person who goes out of her way to help the less fortunate every day. When she is not caring for her family, she devotes time to various civic organizations, including the City Cupboard, the Rape Crisis Center, and the Springfield Center for the Homeless. I can think of no one more deserving of this award than Jane Doe.

I have been asked to nominate the candidate who has, in my opinion, accomplished more than any others in our research field and is deserving of the Outstanding Humanitarian Award. Without hesitation, I choose Dr. John Doe for that honor.

Dr. Doe began making contributions toward understanding communicable diseases when he was still studying for his doctorate degree and he continues twenty years later with the publication of his recent book summarizing his theory on virus mutation.

I had the honor of working with Dr. Doe at the Center for Communicable Disease for two years. During that period, I developed enormous respect for his dedication to the center's work. I also became acutely aware of his great knowledge and skills as well as the endless hours he worked in a determination to help humanity in its struggle against disease.

It has been a privilege to know this brilliant and dedicated scientist and humanitarian. I nominate him and ask that you please call on me if I can further assist you in this regard.

It is my pleasure to recommend Jane Doe for the Sales Executive Award. As head of the Sales Division, I have seen Jane rise from the level of Junior Representative to her present position in a short five years. Jane works tirelessly to update her knowledge of our products--and of the competition's products as well. As an Account Representative, she averaged a new account every month, the highest average in the company. As a Sales Executive, she has been effective at teaching her skills to her five Account Representatives. Their averages are now the highest of any group in our division.

I feel confident that you will agree that Jane Doe is the most deserving candidate for this award. Please feel free to contact me for any additional information you may require.

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How to Write this Endorsement Letter: Expert Tips and Guidelines

Organizations frequently give awards and recognitions on the basis of endorsement letters that provide specific details, cases, and examples of the candidate's accomplishments and qualifications.

• Identify the person you are endorsing and the award for which he or she is a candidate.
• State how long you have known the candidate and discuss the nature of your relationship.
• Consider the kinds of personal qualities and skills for which the award is given and describe how the person you are endorsing possesses those qualities or abilities. List your nominee's achievements.
• Reiterate your direct endorsement in the closure and offer to answer questions or give more information.

Write Your endorsement in Minutes: Easy Step-by-Step Guide with Sample Sentences and Phrases

1 identify the person you are endorsing and the award for which he or she is a candidate., sample sentences for step 1.

• I hereby endorse John Doe as a candidate for the Salesperson of the Year Award.
• I wish to nominate my friend and colleague, Jane Doe, for the annual American Mechanical Engineer Award.
• I would like to endorse Jane Doe for the Springfield Community Service Award.
• Because of Jane Doe's long-term commitment to the viability of Springfield as a manufacturing, agricultural, and educational center, I want to nominate her for the annual Friend of Springfield Award.
• Of all the candidates nominated for the annual award, none strikes me as more deserving and qualified than Jane Doe. I offer my endorsement of her and list some of the reasons why I think she should be recognized.

Key Phrases for Step 1

• as a candidate for
• award to be presented at
• candidate's accomplishments and qualifications
• friend and colleague
• have no hesitation in recommending
• hereby nominate
• is our best choice for
• is my nominee for
• is my choice for
• most deserving and qualified
• my nomination of
• my choice for
• put forward the name of
• seems best qualified to
• should be considered as
• sure you will agree
• the obvious choice for
• thoroughly deserves the
• worthy of recognition
• would like to endorse
• would like to voice my
• would be our first choice for
• would like to nominate

2 State how long you have known the candidate and discuss the nature of your relationship.

Sample sentences for step 2.

• I have known John Doe ever since he joined the company in 1975. I hired him because of his excellent record, and he worked as a highly competent and skilled member of my staff until his promotion to management last year.
• I have known Jane Doe since I started regularly attending city council meetings in 1987.
• I doubt whether Jane Doe even knows who I am, but I have often heard her speak with wisdom, persuasiveness, and dignity on important community issues.
• Jane Doe has been one of my colleagues in the legal community since I started practice in 1980.

Key Phrases for Step 2

• a personal friend as well as
• are not personally acquainted, but
• been one of my colleagues for
• believe I speak for all her co-workers
• both been active in
• can certainly vouch for
• developed a great respect for
• ever since he started working for
• familiar with work of
• first met in
• have come to admire
• joined the company in
• joined my staff in
• know firsthand the accomplishments of
• known her ever since
• often heard him speak
• seen her in action in
• universally admired for
• was first employed by
• were both employed by
• worked under his direction on
• worked together on
• worked with him on

3 Consider the kinds of personal qualities and skills for which the award is given and describe how the person you are endorsing possesses those qualities or abilities. List your nominee's achievements.

Sample sentences for step 3.

• I understand the award is given to the person whose life best characterizes what we stand for as a company: honesty, integrity, and efficient performance. My friend excels in all of these areas.
• I know Jane Doe to be a person of integrity and high moral standards.
• John Doe produces excellent results and meets each completion date on time.
• Jane Doe is well known for her loyalty, dedication, and hard work. She is a tireless promoter of our cause.
• Jane Doe is always among the first to volunteer. She understands the goals and purposes of the organization better than most people.
• Jane Doe was the chief organizer of the fund raiser, and through her untiring efforts, we far exceeded our funding goals.

Key Phrases for Step 3

• a tireless promoter
• although he shuns publicity
• always among the first to
• an exemplary character
• as I understand the requirements
• as all who know him will attest
• excels in the areas of
• has shown his commitment to
• has shown both skill and dedication in
• has been an able spokesperson for
• have won her the respect of
• her actions express more than words could
• integrity is unquestioned
• is well known for her
• monumental contributions to
• prefers to work behind the scenes
• produces excellent results
• shows the qualities of
• to the best of my knowledge
• untiring efforts on behalf of
• whose life best characterizes

4 Reiterate your direct endorsement in the closure and offer to answer questions or give more information.

Sample sentences for step 4.

• For all of these reasons and more I endorse John Doe, without reservation, for the 2019 Doe Associates Employee of the Year Award.
• If I can answer any questions concerning John Doe, please let me know. In my opinion, there is no better qualified candidate in the company.
• John Doe has my full confidence and endorsement for the annual award.
• I know of no one who better exemplifies the personal and professional qualities that we honor through the award.
• Without ignoring the fine qualities of all of the other candidates, I advocate Jane Doe because of her outstanding contribution. She has all of the qualities we honor in giving the award. No one can say that we have diminished our standards by honoring her.

Key Phrases for Step 4

• a wonderful opportunity to
• am proud to nominate
• can feel honored to have candidates like
• deserves this honor
• feel sure you will agree that
• for these reasons
• has my full support
• has all of the qualities
• have complete confidence in
• if I can answer any questions
• if you need any further
• in my opinion
• is well qualified for this
• know of no one who
• many other reasons
• please feel free to
• the list is by no means exhaustive
• who is best qualified for
• who best exemplifies the
• without reservation, I endorse

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4 Tips for Writing a Compelling Award Nomination

Throughout your life, you’ll connect with people, both personally and professionally, who you feel are deserving of recognition. If you come across an award that would be perfectly suited for them, you may be required to submit a formal nomination letter, but finding the right words can be challenging.

The person or panel who is responsible for determining who the award recipient will be must often do their due diligence by reviewing a complete package on each nominee. This typically includes a resume, social media profiles and a recommendation or nomination letter.

Whether you were asked to write an award nomination letter or chose to submit one on your own, following these four tips will help you craft a compelling nomination that will impress any selection committee.

Showcase What Makes your Nominee Unique

Naturally, most people who are nominated for an award are qualified in some way to receive it. So, to ensure your nominee stands out from the rest, try to include interesting details about their career and experiences that will help sway the person or panel who will be selecting the award winner. While your nominee may have similar professional achievements to others in their category, the unique combination of their personal and professional accomplishments could give them the edge over their competition.

Of course, you’ll need to include some key points from their work experience, but try to provide additional detail that goes beyond their resume. For instance, your nominee might have an impressive history of community contributions or they may have spent time on a mission trip abroad. These are details that could make them a more attractive candidate to receive the award.  

Include Personal Anecdotes

When you’ve spent an extended amount of time with someone, whether they’re a personal friend or colleague, you are bound to have firsthand experiences that you can share in your award nomination letter. Because decision makers are typically tasked with taking a wholistic view of each nominee when choosing a recipient, it’s helpful to include personal anecdotes about your nominee to give additional evidence of their qualifications. This will not only make your nomination more credible, but also more compelling.

Research the History of the Award

Before you begin writing your nomination, take some time to research the history of the award and previous award recipients. While there’s typically a list of qualifying criteria available to help you better determine if your nominee would even be eligible, doing some additional research on past winners will help you better determine the type of information you should include about the person you’re nominating. If the award has historically been given to people who are involved in the community, you’ll know to put more emphasis on your nominee’s volunteer contributions.

Focus on the Impact of Their Contributions

When writing the nomination, highlight your nominee’s accomplishments by not only stating what they did, but also showcasing why it matters. For example, your nominee may have implemented an impressive new program or process at work. Rather than just including that simple statement, dive deeper into the ways that the program has saved the company time, money or manpower. If they volunteer on a nonprofit board, go into detail about the ways the organization impacts the lives of the people it serves and how your nominee’s service has contributed to the mission.

Though there can never be a guarantee that your nominee will win an award you’ve submitted them for, ensuring that you present a complete profile of the person’s professional and personal achievements is the best way to set them apart in a pool of qualified applicants.

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How to write a great awards nomination

When it comes to winning awards, writing a great nomination is half the battle.

If you’re thinking about putting a cloud superstar, an innovative organization, or a transformative digital project forward for one of our awards this year, we’ve pulled together some top tips to help you smash your nomination and give your nominee the best possible shot at landing a Digital Revolution Award! 

Plus, read advice from our expert judging panel on what they’ll be looking out for.

Where's the proof?

Right off the bat, your nomination needs to make it clear to the judge reading it who you’re nominating and why. Think of your nomination like a news story—you open with the key points, summing up the story in a few lines, and get into more detail as you go.

Make sure your nomination covers who the nominee is, what they do, why they or their work is notable, and what impact has their work has had up top, so the reader has proper context as you expand on your nomination. 

Nail the basics

Providing hard evidence to back up your reasoning is the best way to sell your nomination. Make sure you include links to news articles, case studies, videos, social media posts, or testimonials in your nomination; basically anything that backs up what you’re saying and showcases your nominee’s work or achievements!

“ Before you even begin writing or filming your submission, it’s important to plan ahead and consider the category that you’re entering,” advises Zoë Morris, President at Frank Recruitment Group.

“Firstly, you’ll want to make sure the person or organization you’re nominating meets the criteria, but also that your submission will highlight this. If you’re unsure where to start, looking at previous winners or shortlists can show you examples of what has caught a panel’s attention before.”

Be specific

Judges will look for tangible examples of excellence and achievement; it’s easy to say that your colleague is great, but make sure you explain why!

Focus on outcome and impact: What did your nominee achieve, and what effects did it have? How did their actions improve or change things? Don’t exaggerate, but don’t be afraid to blow your own or your nominee’s trumpet either!

“Y ou need to figure out the key points you want to make, and those that tick the boxes of the award itself,”  says Zoë Morris, “ to ensure it’s a clear and concise submission. Remember that great work speaks for itself, so don’t be tempted to go overboard explaining the reasoning behind your nomination.”  

Referring back to the award criteria to make sure you hit the key points is a valuable way to stay on track and make sure you’re delivering everything judges need to weigh up your submission.

“A nomination needs to be crisp, concise, and focus on outcomes achieved without loads of motherhood statements,” advises Wendy O’Keeffe, Executive Vice President and Managing Director at NEXTGEN Asia.

“Be clear about what you have achieved and what impact that had on your business, customer, or community.”

Show your passion

Of course, quality matters, but an outstanding nomination isn’t about being word-perfect; it’s about letting your passion and admiration for the nominee shine through.

Be personal and feel free to include anecdotes and personal stories if they’re relevant; these may be cloud computing awards, but we’re all about celebrating the human achievements behind the tech. (Don’t feel that you need to move anyone to tears here either, though. This isn’t the Oscars.)

Spellcheck is your friend

Nothing undermines your efforts to celebrate excellence like poor spelling and grammar, so spellcheck your nomination before you send it! The judges have many nominations to read, and no one wants to second-guess a nomination because it’s difficult to read or understand.

Don't procrastinate when you nominate

Don’t leave it too late! There’s nothing worse than writing a panicked nomination hours before the deadline, only to realize later that you’ve missed out important information. Of course, you don’t have to submit your nomination immediately but start on it in good time in case you think of something else to add later.

How to submit your Digital Revolution Awards nomination

Ready to submit your nomination and give someone in the cloud space a round of applause? Here’s what you’ll need to submit your Digital Revolution Awards nomination: 

• Your details and contact information
• Your nominee's details, including name, job title, company, contact information, social media profiles
• Your reasons for nomination, including evidence like links, case studies, or video if applicable

Nominations should be a maximum of 800 words (we need those juicy details, although not so many that they fill a book!), and you can include links to supporting evidence within that limit. You also can submit a short video outlining your nomination if that’s more your style!

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Tips for Writing a Nomination

Use the information below to help you write a convincing and engaging nomination.

• Choose a category. Describe how your nominee meets the criteria of the category you have selected.
• Use these nomination questions as a guide. Respond to as many of the questions that apply to your nominee's situation.
• Get support. Split up the nomination questions and/or award criteria with co-workers to share writing the nomination text. Ask co-workers, supervisors, students, and/or faculty (including those in other departments, labs, or centers who may work with the nominee) to submit a detailed statement in support of your nomination. 
• Use bullet points. Don't worry about crafting beautiful paragraphs - provide information in a bulleted list.
• Avoid jargon. While you are familiar with your nominee’s work, more than likely the members of the selection committee won’t be. Keep that in mind as you describe the nature and quality of the contributions and accomplishments.
• Include measurable results. Where possible, include measurable results (e.g., monetary savings, a new product or service, clients receiving goods or services in a more timely and/or professional manner, staff morale increasing, students being more informed and better prepared for courses or graduation, etc.).
• Use multiple examples. Include more than one example (the more the better) of how the individual or team went above and beyond the daily responsibilities of the job. See examples of strong nomination responses.
• Submit for both awards. If you wrote an Infinite Mile Award nomination this year, you can also submit it for an Excellence Award or Collier Medal - your nominee is eligible for both. Be sure to review the Excellence Award categories and tailor the nomination to fit one of them.
• Keep recognizing. If you submitted an Excellence Award or Collier Medal nomination last year, consider revising it and citing more recent, specific examples of contributions made over this year and resubmit.
• See how you can strengthen your nomination by using specific details and descriptions .
• Use these questions as a guide to help you write your nomination.

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Significant accomplishment   

• Articulate how the nominee’s work benefits our nation.  
• Accomplishments may relate to a specific event or reflect the cumulative results of many years of work on a particular challenge or mission.  
• Be sure the primary focus of the nomination is on the nominee’s work as a federal employee, and not on volunteer or military service outside the agency.   

Innovation   

• What is bigger, better, more effective or more efficient than what has been done before?  
• Has the nominee developed a new model or process adopted agency-wide or in the private sector?  
• Perhaps they are leading collaboration between agencies or departments where it did not occur before.  

Leadership   

• How does the nominee achieve results from their team?  
• Does the nominee help recruit and inspire the next generation of agency employees?  
• Do they mentor younger employees to help them advance and take on new challenges?  

Commitment to public service   

• What inspired the nominee to work in government or perhaps leave another sector to take a federal job?  
• Have they remained committed to government service despite more lucrative opportunities?  

What We Look for in Nominations

Simplicity   

• Be sure the nomination explains the nominee’s role in achieving the stated accomplishment.  
• Avoid acronyms or insider jargon.  
• Assume our review teams have little expertise or familiarity with specific topic areas.  

Attention-grabbing headlines   

• Capture the reviewer’s attention in the first few sentences with bold statements about what the nominee has done.  
• Start with the conclusion or outcome of the nominee’s work and fill in the details behind it.  
• Read profiles of past honorees to use as models for writing the nomination.  

Good references   

• Include a supervisor or higher-level official who can verify the nominee’s employment status and give the agency’s stamp of approval.  
• Include someone who really knows the nominee, can verify the nomination details, and help us better understand the true nature and scope of the accomplishment. This person may also be a beneficiary who can personally speak to direct impact of the nominee’s work.  
• Think outside the government. Whether in the private sector, nonprofit or academia, consider having someone not affiliated with the agency or federal government who can endorse the nominee and their work.  
• Consider name recognition. If possible, include an agency head, corporate representative or foundation head. This person might not have a personal relationship with the nominee, but is willing to give a strong endorsement.  

Personal touches   

• Sometimes a good human-interest story—either about the nominee or the community they serve— helps advance the nomination.   
• What inspired this person to pursue their field of work?  

Quantify the accomplishment   

• If possible, include numbers that demonstrate the significance of the nominee’s work or accomplishments, such as the number of participants or recipients, or the amount of money or energy saved. 

Nomination Deadline

The nomination deadline for 2024 was January 12, 2024. We will reopen nominations for 2025 in the fall.

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To help you submit letters that add substance to the nomination, here are a few recommendations we have gathered to increase your impact.

• Tell the reader what makes the nominee unique or special. Describe specific characteristics, qualities, or examples that you believe make the nominee stand out or demonstrate how they go above and beyond.
• Quality is appreciated more than quantity. A well-written and concise submission increases the likelihood of a positive outcome.
• Use an  active voice  in your writing.
• How do the letters complement each other?
• What story do the letters collectively tell about the candidate?
• Use the letters to maximize the examples shared about the candidate.

As you write your letter think about the following questions:

• What did the nominee do that was beyond simply doing their job?
• How did they do it?
• What were the results and/or impact?

Proofread the letters prior to submission. Typos and grammatical errors are distracting. A great online resource for writing is the  Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL) .

An additional online resource about writing letters of recommendation is available through  The Writing Center at the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill . 

A nomination letter  should not  be:

• An extended CV or resume
• A list of educational achievements
• A list of awards, appointments, or roles
• A job description showing what the nominee was hired to do

Nominations must be submitted through the Qualtrics form found at the bottom of the nomination webpage .

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Nomination writing strategies.

• Follow the directions!
• Help the selection committee "see" your nominee's attributes and contributions. Cite specific examples: use descriptive language and provide an example that shows the attribute.
• Be specific in how the nominee met the award criteria. Provide concrete examples.
• Avoid too many pronouns and run-on sentences. Make the narrative clear and easy to read.
• It's the quality  not the quantity of nominations!
• Proofread your statements.
• Leave fancy words out. Communicate sincerity and personal commitment.
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• Have others review and critique your work before you submit your nomination letter/form.
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• Share how your nominee reflects the division's core values and beliefs regarding service.
• Describe unique characteristics that are more than just what a great or nice person this nominee is.
• Always assume the judge/reviewer does not know your candidate.
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Short award acceptance speech examples: inspiring examples, short award acceptance speech examples that inspire.

Winning an award is a momentous event in anyone’s life, be it for their personal or professional achievements. Whether you are receiving an award for your contributions to society or for excelling in your field of work, giving a great acceptance speech can do wonders in inspiring others. But how can you craft an acceptance speech that truly resonates with the audience and inspires them? In this blog post, we will delve into the purpose of an acceptance speech, how it can inspire others, and some tips on crafting and delivering one. We’ll also cover common pitfalls to avoid so that your speech has the desired impact on the audience. So let’s get started on creating a memorable and inspiring acceptance speech!

Understanding the Purpose of an Award Acceptance Speech

Acknowledging hard work and team contributions is essential in an award speech, highlighting the collaborative efforts behind the achievement. Expressing gratitude for personal accomplishments demonstrates humility and appreciation. Moreover, integrating company values and sustainability initiatives into the speech emphasizes their significance in organizational success. Featuring business executives within the speech process aligns with the company’s leadership values and showcases their involvement in milestone achievements. The writing process for a good speech involves careful consideration of these elements to ensure a meaningful and impactful delivery, especially when the CEO is present. Overall, a well-crafted award speech not only communicates gratitude but also promotes the company’s values and sustainability efforts, making it a pivotal part of significant events and corporate recognition.

Goals and Importance of an Acceptance Speech

Crafting an award speech is a crucial part of the writing process, especially for business executives, team members, and award winners. A good acceptance speech not only reflects the individual’s own success but also acknowledges sustainability and good practices. When delivering an award speech, it’s essential to inspire others with the power of storytelling and the impact of specific, well-crafted words. CEO and business leaders should use this as an opportunity to set an example with their own speech. By showcasing gratitude and emphasizing company values, an acceptance speech can have a lasting influence and make the event memorable in September.

How an Acceptance Speech Inspires Others

An impactful award speech not only acknowledges the efforts of team members but also serves as a catalyst for inspiring hard work and sustainability within the company. By reflecting on great speech examples, business executives can be inspired to express gratitude and recognize the importance of company sustainability initiatives. Furthermore, a well-crafted acceptance speech has the power to inspire and encourage executives to take proactive measures towards sustaining the company’s values. When acknowledging sustainability in their speeches, award winners can effectively inspire business executives to prioritize and implement sustainable practices for the betterment of the organization and its stakeholders.

Crafting Your Acceptance Speech

Crafting an award speech requires a thoughtful writing process. Whether it’s for business executives or company sustainability, crafting your own speech is crucial. A good acceptance speech acknowledges the efforts of team members and reflects gratitude. Writing an award acceptance speech that inspires others is essential, especially for CEOs and business executives. It’s an opportunity to inspire hard work and sustainability while acknowledging the achievements of the company. The writing process should ensure that the speech examples reflect the importance of the award and the impact it has on the company’s initiatives. Acknowledging company sustainability and reflecting on good acceptance speech examples can inspire great ways forward.

Being Specific in Your Speech

Crafting an award acceptance speech for business executives requires reflecting on specific examples to make the speech more impactful. For instance, acknowledging the team members’ hard work in a sustainability initiative demonstrates appreciation and inspires others. Being specific about the company’s sustainability efforts and the role of each individual can create a good speech that inspires gratitude and motivates further contributions. Incorporating specific examples, such as successful initiatives or the impact of sustainability efforts on the company’s bottom line, can enhance the CEO’s own speech at the award ceremony in September. By focusing on specific achievements and outcomes, the speechwriting process becomes more effective in delivering a memorable and inspiring award speech.

The Power of Storytelling in Your Acceptance Speech

Crafting an award acceptance speech for business executives involves incorporating storytelling to inspire sustainability. By including storytelling in an award ceremony acceptance speech for company sustainability, you can effectively showcase the impact of sustainability initiatives. A well-crafted acceptance speech for business executives can resonate with the audience, emphasizing the importance of sustainability and inspiring hard work. Utilizing storytelling in an award acceptance speech for company dollars can make the speech more impactful and memorable, reflecting the CEO’s commitment to sustainability. September’s award speech writing process should include personal anecdotes that highlight the journey towards sustainability. Crafting your own speech in a good way can enhance its impact, setting a positive example for others.

Preparing to Deliver Your Speech

Rehearsing an award acceptance speech for business executives is essential for making it impactful. The practice of delivering an award ceremony acceptance speech for company sustainability and company dollars is crucial for leaving a lasting impression. It’s important to make your own speech memorable through rehearsal , ensuring it resonates with the audience. Additionally, rehearsing an award acceptance speech for business executives for sustainability in business is key to its success. By going through the writing process and practicing delivery, CEOs can effectively convey their message and inspire others. Taking the time to rehearse ensures that the speech is well-crafted and impactful, leaving a positive and lasting impression on the audience.

Making Your Speech Memorable

Crafting an impactful award speech for business executives involves utilizing good speech examples and incorporating storytelling that resonates with their values. By owning your speech and infusing it with authenticity, you can inspire others and leave a lasting impression on the audience. Whether delivering the speech for company dollars or sustainability initiatives, the writing process should focus on making it memorable and relevant to the CEO and business executives. Rehearsing and refining the speech is crucial for September’s upcoming award ceremony, ensuring that the delivery is powerful and leaves a lasting impact. Incorporating NLP terms seamlessly enhances the process, making the speech memorable for all the right reasons.

Tips for Rehearsing Your Speech

When rehearsing for an award acceptance speech, particularly for business executives in the sustainability sector, it’s essential to practice delivering a speech that highlights the impact and sustainability initiatives of the company. Ensure that the speech incorporates good examples and focuses on the positive aspects of business sustainability. Rehearsing an award ceremony acceptance speech for company sustainability can significantly contribute to its impact and memorability. Moreover, practicing an acceptance speech for business executives should emphasize the good things achieved in business sustainability, making it both impactful and inspiring. Utilize the writing process to craft your own speech, incorporating specific details that resonate with the audience, especially the CEO and other industry leaders. By doing so, you can effectively inspire others and leave a lasting impression.

Avoiding Common Pitfalls in an Acceptance Speech

Crafting an award acceptance speech for business executives involves avoiding common pitfalls for sustainability. It’s crucial to ensure that the speech does not go overboard with emotions, as this can affect its impact. Avoiding common pitfalls in an award ceremony acceptance speech for company sustainability is essential for making a lasting impression. Business executives should craft their own speech while following good acceptance speech examples to guarantee its effectiveness. Addressing the writing process and the CEO’s role in delivering the speech can contribute to its success. Ensuring that the speech is specific and incorporates the power of storytelling will aid in avoiding common pitfalls and creating a memorable impact for sustainability. The writing process should include elements that inspire others and contribute to the overall goals of the acceptance speech.

Can Going Overboard with Emotions Affect the Impact of Your Speech?

Balancing emotions in a speech is crucial for connecting with the audience. Overwhelming emotions may divert attention from the message. A well-balanced emotional tone enhances the resonance and credibility of a speech, influencing audience engagement.

Examples of Short Award Speeches

Frequently Asked Questions

What are some key elements to include in a short award acceptance speech.

When crafting a short award acceptance speech, it’s important to express gratitude to the organization or individuals giving the award. Additionally, acknowledge the support and hard work of those who helped you achieve success. Use personal anecdotes or inspiring quotes to add authenticity and depth to your speech.

How can I make my acceptance speech memorable and inspiring?

To make your acceptance speech memorable and inspiring, start by expressing gratitude and acknowledging the awarding organization. Share a personal story or experience that led to receiving the award. Recognize and thank those who supported you throughout your journey. Finally, end with an inspiring message or call to action related to the award’s significance.

Are there any common mistakes to avoid when giving an acceptance speech?

To make your acceptance speech impactful, avoid rambling or going off-topic. Remember to express gratitude towards those who helped you achieve the award. Avoid being overly self-deprecating or dismissive of your accomplishments. Keep it concise and engaging, leaving a lasting impression on the audience.

Can I personalize my acceptance speech for different types of awards or audiences?

Certainly! You have the freedom to personalize your acceptance speech for various awards and audiences. Tailor your speech to match the tone and style of the event or organization presenting the award. Acknowledge specific achievements or contributions that led to receiving the award, and express gratitude towards mentors, colleagues, and loved ones who supported you throughout your journey.

In conclusion, an award acceptance speech holds tremendous power to inspire and motivate others. By being specific in your speech and incorporating storytelling, you can connect with your audience on a deeper level and leave a lasting impact. However, it is important to strike a balance and avoid going overboard with emotions, as it can potentially dilute the impact of your message. Prepare and rehearse your speech to ensure it is memorable and effectively conveys your gratitude and appreciation. Remember, your acceptance speech is an opportunity to not only express your gratitude but also inspire others to pursue their own passions and dreams.

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Guidance for writing a high-quality employee award nomination.

The Employee Awards Committee wants to help you prepare the best award nomination possible. So we’ve asked former nominators and winners if we could share their nominations with you. Please find a winning nomination for the Administrative Staff Award as well as one for the Team Award.

Learn more about the awards and how you can submit a nomination here .

Here’s a winning nomination for the Administrative Staff Award:

Q. elaborate on how the nominee made a significant contribution to the college..

A. I would like to nominate Chris Hahn for the Administrative Staff of the Year award for the exemplary leadership he has shown in becoming the Dean of Perth Campus. Chris has successfully transitioned from the role of Chair to Dean and has had an enormous yet quiet impact in his role by leading a reinvigoration of the students, faculty and staff and general happiness at the Perth campus.

Chris is a tireless advocate for the skilled trades and apprenticeship programs offered at the College. Over the course of the last few years, we have worked with Chris to organize, host and attend a vast number of skilled trades’ related events and always notice that he tries to attend the events and where ever possible he actively participates by staffing a table, providing tours or giving presentations to visitors.

Whether working with internal or external groups, Chris looks to find the best outcome for all involved and truly exemplifies the core values of the College.

Chris Hahn has and continues to take an active role in the success of all of the students he oversees. He welcomes them through orientation and class visits in the first few weeks or school, sharing his favorite study tips and encourages them to collaborate with each other and support each other through the program.

Q. Elaborate on how the nominee demonstrated outstanding commitment and professionalism.

A. Chris brings a considered and thoughtful approach to leadership but equally a willingness to learn. Not one to be rushed, I have both interacted with him and observed him working with peers, faculty and direct reports. He takes the time to listen and make sure everyone is included in the conversation then returns with a thoughtful and inclusive decision. Yet when it is time take the initiative, he does with gusto and determination. His honesty, friendly and considerate nature a qualities that make him a natural leader.

He always sees the good side of people and encourages other staff members to do the same. Chris has an open door policy and has time for everyone who comes to his door and he works tirelessly well beyond a normal work week.

In the two years since Chris has assumed the position of Dean, his affable nature, clear insight and guiding vision has garnered the respect and admiration of staff, students and the community alike. Students feel more welcomed, involved and self-assured of their success. Staff at all levels feel more supported, respected, engaged and confident of the Campus’ future growth. The community has become more enriched by the diversity and inclusivity of programs which were a result of meaningful consultation with a broader range of stakeholders.

Q. Elaborate on how the nominee is considered by colleagues to be an excellent role model in an educational institution.

A. In understand the depth of the challenges Chris faces with the enrolment at a regional college, he has made it his mission to engage the Perth community and surrounding area. He tirelessly promote the campus at every opportunity. During the Festival of Small Halls initiative, he took it upon himself to attend all of the events in order in the local area like Clayton, Balderson etc. to promote Algonquin College and program offerings, often times at expense of his free time.

Chris leads by example. He does not shy away the tough challenges. For Strategic Enrolment Management, he has work tirelessly to both raise his level of knowledge of a complex problem but has taken the time to bring his colleagues with him in the journey so that all will benefit.

I cannot express within the limits of this short description all of the attributes that Chris Hahn possesses to qualify his nomination for Algonquin College’s Administrative Staff Award. Rest assured that the list would be too exhaustive. If I had to distill the description to its essence, it would include those tangibles: intelligence, vision, tact, diplomacy, leadership, decisiveness and responsibility. However, of greater importance would be the list of intangibles that make up the fabric of a true leader of any organization: caring, respect, humility, commitment, dedication, humor, honesty, integrity, empathy, transparency, hard work and resiliency.

During his tenure Dean Hahn has established a renewed and reinvigorated spirit of cooperation and collaboration. He has captured through effort and consensus building the imagination of many who envision now a brighter and more stable future for the Campus and the community as a whole. It is without hesitation and with much pride that I support Chris Hahn’s nomination for Algonquin College’s Administrative Staff Award.

Here’s a winning nomination for the Team Staff Award:

Q. demonstrated ability to work effectively as a team..

A. I would like to nominate the Automated Grade Entry folks for the Team Award.

The implementation of this college-wide initiative was highly effective and smooth. What was my favourite part? The experience was devoid of complaints! It is my hope that this will become the model for other college-wide initiatives. The automated final grade entry project has been, without a doubt, the smoothest roll-out of any college-wide initiative I can recall. It was so smooth that it was almost a non-event; it was very refreshing that the Department Academic Chair was not gating to the implementation.

Communications, both internal and external, can be indicative of effective teamwork. The “team” consisted of twenty-six (26) participants. Including the User Acceptance Testers (UAT), that would have pushed it to over eighty (80). The team demonstrated their advocacy by constantly soliciting feedback and it felt like they really listened to the end users.

Q. Recognized as outstanding advocates for the College.

A. This accomplishment has all the hallmarks of effective teamwork and very much focused upon the end user community. For example, in my department, the former process required entering the grades six times! The current process has reduced this to two times. Grades are now less prone to error and are available quicker with less effort. This accomplishment is undoubtedly due to the collaboration between four (4) areas of the college. That is not to mention over 60 faculty, support and admin from across the college who participated in the pilots for the early releases and provided feedback, which was critical for it being ready for college-wide implementation in 2015-fall. The very effective consultation and resulting feedback was converted into release-by-release improvements and a near flawless roll-out last semester. Faculty, Support Staff and Admin love it.

Q. Demonstrated outstanding innovation.

A. Saying that the implementation / roll-out went relatively smoothly might be a bit of an understatement. From the first release, the application was user-friendly to the point of being intuitive. For most users, the only needed instruction was, “Enter / approve final grades on ACSIS”. For a small minority, a second needed message was, “If you forgot your ACSIS password, please contact ITS @ 5555”.

Innovation often manifests itself in the details. As the chair, another aspect I appreciated was the default format of the spreadsheet download; it did not require any modification to run Evaluation and Progression (E&P) meetings.

Q. Demonstrated a significant contribution to the success of the College.

A. What was my favourite part? The experience was devoid of complaints! It is my hope that this will become the model for other college-wide initiatives. The automated final grade entry project has been, without a doubt, the smoothest roll-out of any college-wide initiative I can recall. It was so smooth that it was almost a non-event; it was very refreshing that the Department Academic Chair was not gating to the implementation.

I would like the broader college to join me in celebrating the accomplishments of this team. Their significant contribution bodes well for success of future automation exercises.

Learn more about the awards and how you can submit a nomination here . Nominations are due Friday, April 28!

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Kamala Harris Accepts Historic Nomination for Presidency in Confident, Celebratory Speech Capping Week of Democratic Momentum

It was historic. It felt historic. Kamala Harris became the presidential nominee for the Democratic Party on Thursday night, delivering a rousing and confident acceptance speech after a full week of rocket-like momentum driven by a nonstop stream of political stars in Chicago’s United Center.

Harris relayed her own very American story as the child of two immigrants from widely disparate cultures who came to America chasing their own dreams. “The path that led me here in recent weeks was unexpected, but I’m no stranger to unlikely journeys,” she said as she effectively reintroduced herself to voters.

She detailed her career in public service, as a prosecutor, San Francisco District Attorney, Attorney General of California, then Senator and eventually Vice President. “To be clear, my entire career, I’ve only had one client: the people,” she said.

She contrasted this to Donald Trump, who Harris reminded viewers is a felon and a billionaire who only “fights for himself and his billionaire friends.” And in a particularly deft moment, she expressed full throated support for Israel and for Palestinian independence, while also calling for the release of all hostages taken by Hamas and the end of the war Gaza.

Ultimately, the Vice President sought to reclaim for Democrats concepts like patriotism and military support as well as issues related to the border, arguing for a vision of American based on cooperation and community and safety, and freedom.

That theme of freedom in particular has resonated with supporters since Harris became the presumptive Democratic nominee a month ago. The campaign has heavily emphasized the fight for abortion rights and the multicultural nature of American culture, as well as the right to vote.

Indeed, before the night’s programming even began, a substantial portion of the audience filed in dressed all in white — save for Harris’ Alpha Kappa Alpha sisters, who proudly wore their pink, green and pearls — in honor of the suffragette movement that earned women the right to vote.

For many women in the United Center on Thursday night, it wasn’t their first convention. But they unanimously agreed that any previous ones couldn’t compare to Chicago’s event, as Harris’ campaign has energized the base and united the party.

Staci Fox attended the 2008 convention as a delegate for Florida, and told TheWrap that even though “you knew there was something really special that night… there is no comparison.”

On the fourth night of the convention, and almost exactly one month after President Biden officially dropped out, Fox added that the excitement was just as palpable for Harris as the day he endorsed her as his successor.

“It’s almost like we just found out still, we’re still getting used to the news,” she said. “And let’s just hope that things hang on for 75 more days.”

Similarly, Donna West — a current Nevada delegate — attended the 2016 convention and noted that it was far less unified among the Democratic party.

“There were still a lot of Bernie supporters, and so there were, you know, both groups in the audience,” she recalled to TheWrap on Wednesday. “Here, it’s much more united. There’s so much more energy.”

She added that a lot was learned from the Trump administration, and the renewed excitement of the Harris/Walz ticket has been “contagious.”

“Trying to describe this to people at home that want to know what it’s like to be in the room, because I guess it’s amazing on TV, I said, ‘Well, it’s a thousand times more exciting sitting there,'” she added.

For Sonjui Kumar, a member of the South Asians for Harris organization — which a month ago was South Asians for Biden — this week did mark her first convention. For her and her fellow members, Harris’ candidacy is extra personal.

“I mean, any South Asian — and I’m a lawyer — any South Asian lawyer will give you a story about knowing Kamala Harris for the last two decades,” she told TheWrap on Thursday. “She has been part of the legal community, the South Asian community, and a force for Black communities for her whole career.”

Kumar added that “there is no duplication” of the energy in the room, nor of the impact Harris has had on the organization.

“She’s created unity even within the South Asian community,” Kumar said, explaining that the group often varies in political ideologies.

That unity was something Harris echoed in her acceptance speech, saying “We have so much more in common than what separates us. In unity there is strength.”

Stella Camerlengo was also attending her first political convention at just 19 years old, preparing to vote in the presidential election for the first time in her life. In fact, she was the youngest delegate from Michigan at the event, and the communications director for the Michigan College Democrats.

“It has been electric,” she told TheWrap as the crowd waited for the first speakers to take the stage on Thursday night.

For her, it was “refreshing” and “empowering” to see a younger candidate step in — particularly a female one.

“The past 46 presidents, we’ve had a man, upon a man, upon a man, upon a man. And they truly don’t know what it’s like to experience life as a woman,” she lamented.

But more than that, Camerlengo was delighted at the fact that she sees “a little bit of myself” in Harris.

“It makes me so emotional even thinking about it,” she said.

The post Kamala Harris Accepts Historic Nomination for Presidency in Confident, Celebratory Speech Capping Week of Democratic Momentum appeared first on TheWrap .

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How to Write a Student Council Speech

Last Updated: August 17, 2024 Approved

This article was co-authored by Patrick Muñoz . Patrick is an internationally recognized Voice & Speech Coach, focusing on public speaking, vocal power, accent and dialects, accent reduction, voiceover, acting and speech therapy. He has worked with clients such as Penelope Cruz, Eva Longoria, and Roselyn Sanchez. He was voted LA's Favorite Voice and Dialect Coach by BACKSTAGE, is the voice and speech coach for Disney and Turner Classic Movies, and is a member of Voice and Speech Trainers Association. wikiHow marks an article as reader-approved once it receives enough positive feedback. This article has 127 testimonials from our readers, earning it our reader-approved status. This article has been viewed 2,080,394 times.

Being a member of the student council can help you help your school. However, it takes hard work to get into the student council . You need to craft a good speech that gives your classmates incentives to vote for you.

Your Student Council Speech

Use a strong, attention-grabbing opening. Discuss your qualifications briefly, then move on. Focus your speech on your passion and present a blueprint to achieve your goals. Close with a strong summary and call to vote for you.

Sample Speeches

Writing the Introduction

• Do not merely start by saying, "My name is ___ and I'm running for student council." Your classmates will already know as much and this is not really a unique statement. There will be time to state the basic information after you've got the class's attention. [1] X Research source
• You can open with a question. Something like, "If there was one thing you could change about this school, what would it be?" Or a question that adds some humor , like, "I know what you're thinking. Why should I listen to this person?" and then proceed to lay out your credentials. Quotes on leadership, power, and guidance would also make good openings. However, make sure to double-check your sources and especially if you're finding quotes online. Many online quote databases, like Quote Garden or Brainy Quote, sometimes attribute quotes to the wrong sources. [2] X Research source
• If you're stuck, look up and read famous speeches. You can find many speeches from presidents, world leaders, civil rights activists, and others online. Pay attention to how they opened their speeches and ask yourself, "Was this interesting? Do I want to keep reading/listening? Why?" [3] X Research source

• State your name and grade in school. This may feel somewhat unnecessary if you go to a small school, but it's considered a formality. If you're missing this part of the speech, you may end up looking sloppy in comparison to other students. [5] X Research source
• State what you want. That is, what you're running for. Do you want to be the president , vice president , treasurer, secretary? Even if you think most students are aware of what position you're running for, make sure you state it here to remind them. [6] X Research source
• Try to keep this section brief as it's not as important as your qualifications and plans to improve the school . Even one sentence would suffice. For example, "My name is Ramona Hart, I'm in the 11th grade, and I'm running for treasurer of the student council."

• Any accomplishments relevant to the position warrant mentioning here. If you're running for secretary, for example, talk about your summer job filing papers in your uncle's law firm. If you're running for student council president, talk about your leadership experience being captain of the swim team. [7] X Research source
• While this section is important, try to keep it minimal. A couple of sentences laying out your qualifications is enough as the body of your speech is where you should spend the most time. For example, let's go back to the above example. From there, we could say, "I am currently enrolled in advanced placement algebra and I have been an honor roll student for three years. This knowledge of numbers and diligence qualifies me to have responsibility for finances for our student council." [8] X Research source

Writing the Body of the Speech

• You should list your ideas and then expand on them later in the body. It might take a bit of research to figure out what you want to change. Ask around the school, talking to students and teachers, and see where there's room for improvement. What are the concerns of the students? What are people happy with regarding the school? What would they like to see change? Asking these questions can help you get a sense of your audience and community.
• Remember, you should not make promises you cannot keep. Do not say anything just to get elected. While many students might want gum-chewing policies eliminated or for the lunch period to run twice as long, this is probably not necessary or possible. Try to focus on areas that seem important to keep your school running safely and efficiently. Concerns about things like bullying , academic standards, and extracurricular activities should be your concern over fun and games. [10] X Research source
• A good opening statement for your body would state the causes important to you and what you plan to do about them. For example, if you were running for president, you could say something like, "I understand we need to improve how we handle bullying, increase interest in extracurricular activities, and expand access to AP courses throughout the school. As your president, I would work to bring in speakers to talk about sensitivity in the classroom, increase advertising for basketball games and quiz bowl tournaments, and start a tutoring program to help students struggling with certain subjects." [11] X Research source

• Using the school library or computers, figure out the best means to tackle certain problems many schools face. How have other schools dealt with bullying? Poor test scores? Low interest in extracurricular activities? What can you reasonably do as a student council member to address these problems? [12] X Research source
• You do not have to have a point-by-point plan laid out, but a few sentences on some preliminary ideas can help you stand out from your peers. People are more inclined to vote for someone who's thought about how to solve problems in addition to identifying problems. [13] X Research source

Ending with a Strong Conclusion

• Do summarize, briefly, your qualifications but do not put the main focus on them. This is where you should sincerely state your passion. Students should not just vote for you because you'd do a good job but because you genuinely care about the school. State your passion for your community and how much you want to see other students succeed. Lots of students have high qualifications. You can set yourself apart by being a candidate who really cares. [16] X Research source

• Research what other student council speeches are like on video websites. This could help give you ideas.

Expert Q&A

• Only promise to do things that you really can do. Thanks Helpful 2 Not Helpful 0
• Practice reading your speech a few times, as you'll likely be nervous before giving it. Thanks Helpful 2 Not Helpful 0

• Even if you write a great speech, understand you may lose. Be prepared to lose graciously and sincerely congratulate the winning candidate. Thanks Helpful 111 Not Helpful 18
• Unlike in a governmental election, student council candidates should not attack each other, previous leaders, or other students. Otherwise, you could get into trouble and leave a bad impression on voters. Thanks Helpful 84 Not Helpful 16

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• ↑ http://www.studentcouncilpro.com/student-council-speeches.html
• ↑ http://www.write-out-loud.com/student-council-speeches.html
• ↑ Patrick Muñoz. Voice & Speech Coach. Expert Interview. 12 November 2019.

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To write a student council speech, start with an attention-grabbing statement such as a question or a powerful quote about leadership. Next, briefly explain who you are, what position you are running for, and why you are running. Then list any relevant qualifications, such as a summer job. In the body of the speech, discuss at least 3 ways to improve the school. For this section, make sure not to make any promises you can’t keep. Finally, end by briefly reiterating your main points and asking for the students’ vote. To learn more about how to support your ideas and research for your speech, keep reading! Did this summary help you? Yes No

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Vice President Kamala Harris has officially accepted the Democratic nomination for president, making her the first Black woman and the first Asian-American to lead a major party’s ticket. Speaking at the Democratic National Convention Thursday night, Harris said, “On behalf of the people, on behalf of every American regardless of party, race, gender, or the language your grandmother speaks; on behalf of my mother and everyone who has ever set out on their own unlikely journey; on behalf of Americans like the people I grew up with, people who work hard, chase their dreams, and look out for one another; on behalf of everyone whose story could only be written in the greatest nation on Earth. I accept your nomination for president of the United States of America.”

Of course, Harris is plenty used to making history: She was the first woman, the first Black woman, and the first South Asian American to ever become vice president of the United States. She broke the same barriers in California when she became attorney general of the state. And she is still only one of three Black women to serve in the United States Senate. Were Harris to become president, she would not only shatter what Hillary Clinton has often referred to as the “highest, hardest” glass ceiling, she would usher in an entirely new vision of what the first family can look like, as she is married to Doug Emhoff , the first Jewish spouse to a vice president, who could become the first-ever First Gentleman. Harris is also known as Momala to her step-children, Cole and Ella.

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